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A/N:Warning! This is a failed atempt at a lemon so there is a bit of nudity! Okay I don't think that this one is good at all so I'll be surprised if this one gets as many veiws/faves as the other ones have.

1- Okay this was just kinda cheezy sorry >.< its the only thing I could think of at 10:00 PM when I was writing this when I was suposed to be in bed...

2- I probably made him really OOC there didn't I?

3- Turkey was being nice to the reader not greece...yeah...I have no clue why I added that in there I just did so meh.

Stuffed Kitten pull out a stuffed Kitten.

"Aw! It's so cute! Can I keep it?" you ask as you hold the [brown, blonde, black, white, or combintaion of colors] coloerd stuffed kitten close to you.

"Yeah, of course you can [Name.]" the voice of your crush says behind you.

"Yay! Thank you Heracles!" you say with a smile as you look behind you to see him asleep on a neat by couch.

"Dude Heracles, get up its your turn!" Alfred says pulling him up off the couch and into the closet.

"You too [Name], in you go." Alfred says holding the door open for you.

"Thanks Alfred." you say walking into the closet.

"No problem dudette, good luck keeping him awake." Alfred says closeing and locking the door.

"Heracles? Where are you?" you ask looking around the dark closet.

"Down here..." he replys then you get on your hands and knees.

You crawl a little bit and once you got close enough to him he pulls you into his chest. Your face turns bright red as his arms go around your waist effectivly pulling you closer to him.

"It's more comfertable laying down then it is to be on your hands and knees right?" he asks with a soft smile.

"Y-Yeah..." you reply putting the stuffed kitten to the side as you snuggle coser to him.

His breathing slows and you smile thinking he was asleep.

"I love you Heracles." you say closing your eyes and smiling.

Then a pair of lips cautch yours in a surpisingly very passionate kiss, your eyes shoot open as Heracles breaks the kiss and smiles at you.

"I love you too [Name], will you be my godess?(1)" Heracles asks seriously.

"Of course I will!" you reply kissing him agian.

He licks your bottom lip for entrance with you gladly give him and starts to explore the inside of your mouth.

His hands travel from your waist to the hem of your black tanktop slightly pulling on it, you temperarly break the kiss as Heracles pulls off your tanktop to revil your [f/c] strapless bra.

He undoes your bra and marvels at your body, which you tried to cover up but he pins your arms down.(2)

"You truly are a godess and now your my godess." he says with a smile as the doors quickly open, he releses your arms and Alfred, along with Kiku, take a picture.

You squeak and hide yourself in Heracles's body from everyone.

Sadiq comes up to the door "Get dressed the come out." he says closing the door and Heracles hugs you.(3)

"I love you [Name] godess..." he says and helps you get dressed.

"I love you too Heracles," you reply " god..." you kiss him quicky grabbing your stuffed kitten as Heracles opens the door and you walk out of the closet.

The rest of the party sleeping in the arms of your new boyfriend.


Okay so I tried to make this a lemon...I'm not sure if i did or not...probably not...
Request: :iconphasewalker99:
Beta Reader: :iconwolf-girl15:
Story: :iconphasewalker96:
Intro: [link]
I don't own Hetalia, the picture, or you!
Please tell me if there is any misspelled words my beta reader hasn't gotten the chance to read this yet but yeah....please tell me! I would like to fix any mistakes ASAP!
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Silenced-Nocturne Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was like "Yay, LEMON TIME" 

then it ended up not happening. 

It was still so adorably fluffy though. ^ ^
TheAwesomePrussia531 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ASAP! ................................rocky ;-)
NatureTune Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I love your fanfics :glomp: *Addes Author to watch`s list*
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yays!!(sorry for the late reply btw!)
NatureTune Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student General Artist
It`s okay :tighthug: And don`t read/listen haters. Youre` doing good job here :salute:
snow-master286 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
I actually liked it a lot! Forget wat haters say!! :iconcutemonkeyplz:
mrslewey Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
mrslewey Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
I wubs ma greece :iconsexygreece:
Izumi055 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Writer
(still awesome though)
KittyKirkland Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You guys leave her alone! The story was perfect~! >w< Whether it was a lemon or not, or whether she spelled things wrong.
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