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A/N:Warning! This is a failed atempt at a lemon so there is a bit of nudity! Okay I don't think that this one is good at all so I'll be surprised if this one gets as many veiws/faves as the other ones have.

1- Okay this was just kinda cheezy sorry >.< its the only thing I could think of at 10:00 PM when I was writing this when I was suposed to be in bed...

2- I probably made him really OOC there didn't I?

3- Turkey was being nice to the reader not greece...yeah...I have no clue why I added that in there I just did so meh.
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Stuffed Kitten



...you pull out a stuffed Kitten.

"Aw! It's so cute! Can I keep it?" you ask as you hold the [brown, blonde, black, white, or combintaion of colors] coloerd stuffed kitten close to you.

"Yeah, of course you can [Name.]" the voice of your crush says behind you.

"Yay! Thank you Heracles!" you say with a smile as you look behind you to see him asleep on a neat by couch.

"Dude Heracles, get up its your turn!" Alfred says pulling him up off the couch and into the closet.

"You too [Name], in you go." Alfred says holding the door open for you.

"Thanks Alfred." you say walking into the closet.

"No problem dudette, good luck keeping him awake." Alfred says closeing and locking the door.

"Heracles? Where are you?" you ask looking around the dark closet.

"Down here..." he replys then you get on your hands and knees.

You crawl a little bit and once you got close enough to him he pulls you into his chest. Your face turns bright red as his arms go around your waist effectivly pulling you closer to him.

"It's more comfertable laying down then it is to be on your hands and knees right?" he asks with a soft smile.

"Y-Yeah..." you reply putting the stuffed kitten to the side as you snuggle coser to him.

His breathing slows and you smile thinking he was asleep.

"I love you Heracles." you say closing your eyes and smiling.

Then a pair of lips cautch yours in a surpisingly very passionate kiss, your eyes shoot open as Heracles breaks the kiss and smiles at you.

"I love you too [Name], will you be my godess?(1)" Heracles asks seriously.

"Of course I will!" you reply kissing him agian.

He licks your bottom lip for entrance with you gladly give him and starts to explore the inside of your mouth.

His hands travel from your waist to the hem of your black tanktop slightly pulling on it, you temperarly break the kiss as Heracles pulls off your tanktop to revil your [f/c] strapless bra.

He undoes your bra and marvels at your body, which you tried to cover up but he pins your arms down.(2)

"You truly are a godess and now your my godess." he says with a smile as the doors quickly open, he releses your arms and Alfred, along with Kiku, take a picture.

You squeak and hide yourself in Heracles's body from everyone.

Sadiq comes up to the door "Get dressed the come out." he says closing the door and Heracles hugs you.(3)

"I love you [Name]...my godess..." he says and helps you get dressed.

"I love you too Heracles," you reply "...my god..." you kiss him quicky grabbing your stuffed kitten as Heracles opens the door and you walk out of the closet.

The rest of the party sleeping in the arms of your new boyfriend.

~THE END~

Okay so I tried to make this a lemon...I'm not sure if i did or not...probably not...
Request: :iconphasewalker99:
Beta Reader: :iconwolf-girl15:
Story: :iconphasewalker96:
Intro: [link]
I don't own Hetalia, the picture, or you!
Please tell me if there is any misspelled words my beta reader hasn't gotten the chance to read this yet but yeah....please tell me! I would like to fix any mistakes ASAP!
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Silenced-Nocturne Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was like "Yay, LEMON TIME" 

then it ended up not happening. 

It was still so adorably fluffy though. ^ ^
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TheAwesomePrussia531 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ASAP! ................................rocky ;-)
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NatureTune Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student General Artist
I love your fanfics :glomp: *Addes Author to watch`s list*
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yays!!(sorry for the late reply btw!)
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NatureTune Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student General Artist
It`s okay :tighthug: And don`t read/listen haters. Youre` doing good job here :salute:
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snow-master286 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
I actually liked it a lot! Forget wat haters say!! :iconcutemonkeyplz:
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mrslewey Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
:iconnakedgreeceplz:
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mrslewey Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
I wubs ma greece :iconsexygreece:
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Izumi055 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Writer
lime
(still awesome though)
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KittyKirkland Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You guys leave her alone! The story was perfect~! >w< Whether it was a lemon or not, or whether she spelled things wrong.
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm glad you liked it :3
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KittyKirkland Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really did! XD :3
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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KittyKirkland Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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GinaTheFaceOfAwesome Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's spelled goddess...
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blackdreamer17 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
yea its not a lemon
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know
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blackdreamer17 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
ok
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Bbg100 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
I always imagined if I got Greece the door would open to see.....Both of us sleeping together covered in cats ^.^
(Cats....cats everywhere...cats in the vents...)
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yeah that would be funny. Also BTW love your icon of Female Ranma XD
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Bbg100 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Thanks ^.^
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome :3
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ShiroTakaori Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icongrammarnaziplz::iconsaysplz:it's goddess not godess 
:iconshirotakaori::iconsaysplz:I'm sorry to be grammar nazi :iconimsorryplz:I can't help it....it's a (bad) habit 
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XxArtist4EvaxX Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have the same habit...you're not alone.
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nekosicily927 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
Oh good, I'm not the only grammar nazi
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its fine, most of my friends are so no worries!
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ShiroTakaori Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAY :D
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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animeloverforlife3 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
whats with the numbers ???
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh those are just little notes that I made while writing it and the numbers correspond with the other numbers
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animeloverforlife3 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, sorry if it was confusing
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animeloverforlife3 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
i like it though
:iconrabbitsplz: :iconrabbitsplz: :iconrabbitsplz: :iconrabbitsplz: :iconrabbitsplz: 
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Happy dance
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animeloverforlife3 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
:iconyeahplz: :iconyeahplz: :iconyeahplz: :iconyeahplz: :iconyeahplz: 

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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao!
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Chrysti-the-goddess Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Nicole: That. Was. AWESOME!!!! Jumpy Clappy my first emote Awesome clap emoticon :Clap: clap remake 1a 
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol Glad u liked it ^^
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Chrysti-the-goddess Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I do not like it. I LOVE IT!!
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay I'm happy that u do
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Chrysti-the-goddess Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well, I am glad that you're happy that I do.
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kawaii~
Good story
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha thanks and glad you like the story!
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :iconnakedgreeceplz:
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
* :iconsexygreeceplz:
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Kuraudia-Ve Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww! So cute! I love when Alfred, Kiku, and Sadiq come up lol
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol thanks
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww!!!
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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tigers117 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student Artist
Oh I think sadiq might be a little jeal
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