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Rose pull out a rose.
'Oh fuck...' you think as you stare at the flower in your hand, knowing exactly who it belongs to.

"Ohonhonhon." you hear a laugh behind you and you quickly turn around to see Francois Bonnefoi smiling at you.

'Oh shit! Oh shit!' you began to freak out in your head.

Okay, yes you've been crushing on the Frenchman for some time now but the thought of being alone with him for seven minuets in a dark cramped closet kinda scared you.

Especially when you know that he's a huge flirt and what's more then "It" and you still being a virgin your not ready for "that" least not now anyway. You nervously go into the closet and Francois does the same but is stopped by Alfred, your best friend since your freshmen year of high school(1), for a moment.

"Don't you dare do anything to her..." Alfred says glaring at him making sure his warning was clear.

"We mon mo me(2), I'll be a good boy don't worry." Francois says winking and shuts the door behind him.

'Oh my god what do I do now?!' you yell in your head.

Francois grabs your shoulder and you flinch letting out a small yelp.

"Don't worry [Name] I'm not going to do do anyzing." he says sweetly.

"R-Really?" you ask shocked.

"I would never lie to you [Name]." he says smiling and lets your shoulder go.

"Wow...I thought you would be all over me or something." you say relaxing yourself.

"I could never bring myself to do somezing like zat to you." he says leaning ageist the wall and looks down at the dark cluttered floor.

"I was not expecting that..." you say still shocked.

Then you start to think...Francois has never said something like that before. Why was he saying it to you? Are you not as good as any other girl? Is there something wrong with you? You started to get a little upset about the possibility.

"Why?" you ask, he looks up at you a little shocked but smiled a little.

"Because I love you." he says ever so sweetly and you could hear the smile in his voice.
Hearing those four words made your feelings for him to over flow with joy. You couldn't believe he said that to you.

"Do you mean it?" you ask happily.

"Of course [Name]like I said, I could never lie to you." he says standing up straight and moving closer to you then brushed some of your [h/c] hair behind your ear.

You gave him a big smile and grabbed the side of his face with your hands then pulled him closer for a semi-rough kiss. The door slams open to show Alfred.

"Dude! You okay?!" Alfred yells as you gently push Francois away and gave Alfred a big smile.

"Ya, I'm just fine, Alfie!" you reply happily.

You grab the shocked Francois's hand and guide him out of the closet. Gilbert and Antonio give Francois a thumbs up; he just smiles back at them. You later left the party to have a little "party" of your own with your new boyfriend ;) Ohonhonhon~!

A/N: (1) Did I tell you that this is after their out of high school? (2) I have absolutely no clue what its supposed to be -.- my friend wrote this for me so yeah....


Well here's France's friend wrote this for me so yeah
Also I don't own Hetalia, the picture, or you!
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Sorry if there is miss spelled words but comment with the correct spelling please!
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xXCharlotteAngelXx Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
its sopoato be spelled "oui, mon ami" and it means "yes, my friend" in the masculine sence
Allie10930 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
Francis bonnefoy*
MelanthaTatsuya Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
uhmm... 2 should be "Oui, mon amie."
cuz reader-chan is a girl... right? There's a distinction, that's all I'm gonna say!
(And I'm sorry! I realize that you probably get a a lot of these types of comments for this story.... Really good, by the way!)
MineUntilTheEnd Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Photographer
But because the reference is to Alfred, it's fine as masculine. And I agree with Melantha, I'm liking where all these are going!
Sammaster0524 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student General Artist
In French it's oui not we
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nexth8rmony Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Francis* :P
Gekko73 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
We mon mo me(2)
Oui, mon ami
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I haven't been able to change that yet T~T I've been so busy with other things at home
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