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You and your mom went to the park; you went off to play. After you ran off to go play your mom left for home, full aware that you didn't know your way back home. You where only a 4 year old girl and she was your mother but she still desisted to abandon you...

When it started to get dark out you went over to the spot where your mom told you to met her at, under a pine tree,...she wasn't there...

A few hours later and she still hadn't come...it was getting really dark and you where getting scared...you cluched your stuffed [dog/rabbit/cat] close to you. A few hours later you fell asleep under the tree.

~The Next Day...~

You where woken up by a group of teenaged boys throwing you up into the tree you where under...you cling to one of the branches and two blonde boys around your age or a little older then you come to see whats going on.

"Hey little girl...is this your stuffed [dog/rabbit/cat]?" one of the teenagers ask holing up a  white [dog/rabbit/cat] in one hand and in the other held a pocket knife.

"[D/n]...please don't hurt her!" you cry out clinging more to the branch.

The branch starts to brake as the teenager starts to rip apart [D/n].

One of the two boys runs off while the other one speaks up.

"Stop it! That's not yours so stop it!" the boy yells.

You can clearly see the boy now, he had short dusty blonde hair with a cowlick and bright blue sky blue eyes.

The branch breaks more as the other boy comes back with two adults; one of them with short messy blonde hair and emerald eyes, the other had shoulder length blonde hair and blue eyes. The boy had short wavy blonde hair with a curl sticking out and violet eyes, at the sight of the adults the teenagers ran taking your stuffed [dog/rabbit/cat] with them.

"Alfred! What where you thinking?! You could have gotten hurt!" The adult with the emerald eyes says yelling slightly.

"I was trying to be the hero and save her!" Alfred says pointing up toward you.

He looks up at you and the branch snaps.

You scream as you fell, instead of hitting the ground you where in someone's arms and you look up to see the blue eyed adult.

Your whole body shook with fear then he held you close to him and tried to calm you down.

"'ey Arthur, she's shaking quiet badly...I wonder why she was up there in the first place and where 'er parents are..." the blue eyed adult says coming over to Arthur still trying to calm you down.

Arthur nodded his head as you start to calm down.

"What's your name petite fille?" the blue eyed man asks as you look up at him.

"[Name] [Last Name]...thank you for saving me..." you answer softly.

"Okay [Name], how old are you?" Arthur asks and you hold out 4 fingers.

"I'm 4 years old!" you say proudly as the man sets you down on the ground.

"Where are your mama and papa?" the blue eyed man asks.

"My daddy left me and mommy when I was this old," you hold out 2 fingers "my mommy..." you say as you look down at the ground finding it more interesting then anything else.

"Um...excuse me?" a young woman's voice asks behind Arthur and the other man, they both look behind them to find a young woman around the age of probably 25 with long brown hair and brown eyes.

"Yes miss, is there anything we can do to help you this fine afternoon?" Arthur asks.

"Um yes, does this [dog/rabbit/cat] belong to anyone here?" the woman asks holding up a fully fixed [dog/rabbit/cat].

You look up and your face lights up.

"[D/n]!" you say and run up to her tears in your [e/c] eyes.

She kneels down to your eye level and smiles softly handing you the [dog/rabbit/cat], which you buried your face into.

"I'm sorry about how my son and his friends treated you and [D/n], but I fixed her up like brand new." she says softly.

Your whole body starts shaking again.

"T-Thank you so much!" you say and start crying.

Arthur picks you up and starts rocking you while whispering comforting words into your ear as you soon fell asleep in his arms.

"You have a beautiful daughter." the woman says standing up and smiles.

"Oh no, she's not ours. We just found her here...it seems like her mother abandoned her here..." Arthur says looking down at you sadly.

"Oh my, that's a pitty...poor thing and so young too..." she says shaking her head.

"Oui, it is." the blue eyed man says picking up both boys.

The woman said her good byes and left.

"Hey Francis...what should we do with her? I mean we can't leave her out here and an orphanage is no place to raise a child to be raised..." Arthur says on their way home.

"Oui...but can we handle raising another child? Antonio has Lovino to take care of and Gilbert would probably try to rape her when she got older but he has to take care of Ludwig too..." Francis says with a sigh.

They both look at your sleeping form in Arthur's arms, reminding him of Alfred when he was younger and reminding Francis of Matthew when he was younger as well.

A/N: Okay by younger I mean like 2-3 years old cuz Alfred and Matthew are like 5-6 years old.

They decide to raise you because you had grown on them in the short amount of time you spent with them.

THE END?

Okay I've had this story done for a while now and yeah...it wasn't a request or anything I just though that it would be nice to have the entire F.A.C.E. family and a little reader story...it more or less was a dream at first but yeah...I don't know if I'm gonna make a second part to this or not its purly up to what you guys think so yeah....
I don't own Hetalia, the picture or you!
Beta reader: :iconwolf-girl15:
Story: :iconphasewalker96:
I hope you all enjoy!
EDIT!!!
4/4/13: So sence so many people have asked for a second part I will hopefully eventually make a second part but it may take some time so yeah...

4/6/13: here's part 2!!!: [link]

5/12/13: Here's part 3~!: [link]

6/7/12: Here's part 4~!: [link]
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:iconpotatoesalsaexplodsi:
PotatoeSalsaExplodsi Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Obviously don't leave Reader-chan with Gilbert
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:iconitaliagurl:
italiagurl Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  New member Student Artisan Crafter
wow just wow but wears th pasta~
had to just had to ve~
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:iconrosemayliegottschalk:
RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I Would Probably Eliminated Prussia Before He Tries.
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:iconbrokenheartedkiller:
Brokenheartedkiller Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
How dare you take my Shadow I'll kill you!!! Not only that you destroyed the only thing that looks like my old dog!!!
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:iconmajoraswolf:
MajorasWolf Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
wait
WAIT
WAIIIT
My last name is Francis


I just confused France on a whole new level
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:icons1mr4n:
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
OHMYGOD! YOU HAVE MY BIG BROTHERS NAME FOR YOUR LAST NAME
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:iconmajoraswolf:
MajorasWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
THATS WERID
HNNN
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:icons1mr4n:
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
DUN DUN DDDDUUUUUHHH!
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:iconmajoraswolf:
MajorasWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
ITALIAN PIZZA WITH HAM IS GROSS
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:icons1mr4n:
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Lol wut?! XD
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:iconmajoraswolf:
MajorasWolf Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
waut
oJo
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:icons1mr4n:
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
I dunno
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Written-Note Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Desisted is incorrect I
Desisted means that you don't want to
Insisted means you do
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Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Edited Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A stuffed flying mint bunny with a rainbow horn, a maple leaf, roses, and blue red and white eyes. Named mr mcgreenwings. MOST EPIC STUFFED ANIMAL IN THE HISTORY OF EVER!!!!!!
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
DUDE THAT'S AWESOME! MAYBE EVEN AWESOMER TGAN PRUSSIA! (Ha I kid......nothing can be was more awesome that Prussia.......expect Nutella.....)
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HELLS YEAH!
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
NUTELLA IS SO AWESOME AND YUMMAI!
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YUSH!
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:icons1mr4n:
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Wish I had Nutella naow.......god I went to the shops a few minties ago! Why didn't I ask then?!
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno!
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:icons1mr4n:
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
I'm so stupid sometimes
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Agreed! XD
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wis it was real....
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:iconbutterscotchripple77:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
instead of listed toys
I pick stuffed toy slendy dog
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:iconunwanted-immortals:
Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Gilbert will probly rape reader-chan? ..... Uhmmmmm and who exactly caught her? FRACIS ...... Makes no sense -.-
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha. *12 years later* DADDY! Prussia invaded my vital regions!
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Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014
XD
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. Prussia is such a jerk for invading my regions!
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:iconunwanted-immortals:
Just kidding I loved it
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erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
nice daughter. hmmmm. who were the 2 adults again?????:iconmnrrapeplz: :iconmnrrapeplz: :iconmnrrapeplz: :iconmnrrapeplz: 
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PotatoeSalsaExplodsi Featured By Owner 2 days ago
That face tho
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:iconbutterscotchripple77:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Student Artist
Fruk *France and England walk in* Gotta go bye! *closes laptop before they see that I typed Fruk*
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erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hehehe. they'll never know your secret...
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:iconbutterscotchripple77:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
phew. their gone.
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:iconerinkirland-mulby:
erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that was close...
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:iconbutterscotchripple77:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
tell me about it
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:iconerinkirland-mulby:
erinkirland-mulby Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*runs to UK*

did you see anything??
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:iconbutterscotchripple77:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
England: *sighs* "Yes, but I refrained from giving her the talk about FrUk being a bad thing."
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pockeydocterchu Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wouldn't be talking Mr. Rapist/Pervert! >:I
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:iconmckayladraws:
McKaylaDraws Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student General Artist
That mom has some skills to fix that toy in a span of five minutes
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
PLOT HOLE!!!!! (Cue dramatic music) DUN DUN DUNNNNNN
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Right?
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:icono0dramaticusername0o:
"Gilbert would probably try to rape her...."


Is anyone else a little disturbed by this? O.o
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Unwanted-immortals Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Is anyone also thinking about goddamn Francis .... He's there too
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:iconcrazyhetalialover13:
CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes I am!
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
One of my friends desided to type that in there when I wasn't looking and yeah...
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BlueKitten06 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
I know the feel... I went to the kitchen for oreo.. when I came back.... my brothers typed nonsense stuff on my story -.-
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ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
well, I went to the bathroom for a minute, and when I come back, I see my brother sitting at my laptop, on my DA account, faving porn. I un-faved it before any of my watchers saw it.
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BlueKitten06 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
O.o WTH
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:iconbutterscotchripple77:
ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Artist
either he was trying to get me to have zero watchers, or he is a total weirdo
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