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Cherry Blossom




A/N: So...this is my second ending for this...I don't think I did the best at this one but...yeah.



...you pull out a cherry blossom...


You automatically knew who it belonged to, your long time quiet crush...Kiku Honda.


You walk up to the quiet short black haired male, a light blush staining your [s/c] cheeks and you smile softly. He was sitting buy Ludwig and Feli(1), mutual friends of both of yours.


"U-Um...Kiku..." you say interrupting his conversation.


"Oh...um...konichiwa [Name]-chan...what do you need?" Kiku asks looking up at you.


"Well...I...um..." you studder a little holding the cherry blossom delicately in your hands.


"Kiku, [Name] drew your item so its your turn dude!" Alfred says smiling putting an arm around your shoulder as the blush on your face darkens ten fold.


Alfred pulls Kiku off of the couch and pulls the both of you over to the closet, then he shoves the both of you into the small cramped closet.


"Got seven minutes! Make it last!" Alfred says closing and locking the door behind us.


"I-I'm really glad I got your item Kiku..."you say with a quiet voice smiling a little.


"R-Rearry [Name]-chan?" Kiku asks a little surprised.


"Y-Yeah...really..." you say thankful that the room around you is dark so he wouldn't see your reddening face.


"I-I'm grad you got it too [Name]-chan..." Kiku says moving closer to you with out you even noticing anything.


"So um...waht should we do now...oh! That's right here's your item back..." you say holding out your hands.


"Its fine you keep it, a beautifur frower for a beautifur person." Kiku says picking up the flower and put it behind your ear gently resting ageist your [h/c] hair.


You giggle slightly "Are you trying to copy Francis again?" you ask smiling.


"N-No!I mean it [Name]!" Kiku says looking at you a slightly hurt look in his eyes.


"Kiku..." you say then look at the ground and gulp slightly.


'I'm gonna do it...I'm gonna tell him...well...here goes nothing...' you think and take a deep breath looking up towards Kiku but not making eye contact.


"K-Kiku..." you say looking into his dark brown eyes with your [e/c] ones.


"Hai?" Kiku replays staring into your [e/c] eyes wondering what your gonna say.


"I-I-I-I...lo-lo-love you Kiku Honda!" you say closing your eyes waiting for him to either accept or deny your feelings for him.


Kiku looked at you shocked then pulls you close to him despite his personal bubble problems. He lifted your chin up gently and kisses you passionately on the lips. You soon melt into the kiss. A few moments later he pulls away and lets the both of you breath for a little bit.


"Watashi wa amarini mo anata o aishite, [Name]." Kiku says softly.


"What?" you aks a little confused about what he just said.


"I rove you too, [Name]." he says smiling.


You smile happily and hug him as the door to the closet opens quickly then there is a flash.


"Aw! Their just hugging...alright you two come on out..." Alfred says walking away he grumbles something under his breath.


Kiku gets up first then helps you up and whispers in your ear. "Wirr you be my girrfriend?"


"What's the Japanese word for 'yes'?" you ask smiling and looking up at him.


"Hai..." he replays.


"Okay then hai, I will Kiku." you say happily.


The two on you walk back over to Ludwig and Feli1. And for the rest of the night the four of you chatted and hung out with your new boyfriend, Kiku Honda.



~The End~

Here's Japan's ending...
Enjoy again!
My beta reader: :iconwolf-girl15:
Please tell me if there is any misspelling in here...my beta reader wasn't available at the time so I just typed it up so I wasn't just leaving everyone waiting for the next ending...
Also I don't own Hetalia, the picture, or you!
Translations:
Konichiwa= hello or hi
Watashi wa amarini mo anata o aishite= I love you too
Hai= yes
Note(s):
(1) I put Feli on there instead of typing it all out cuz I felt lazy...sorry! >.<
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:iconmelon-wolf:
Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Almost all of Kiku's "l"s are "r"s XDD
Good story besides that
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think I tryed to catch them as I was typing it so I'm guessing I missed some?
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:iconmelon-wolf:
Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No worries XD just a few times
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright thank you for noticing them!
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Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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Magicthekiller Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsofluffyplz:
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draculaurabloom Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz: :iconyayjapanplz: :iconletmehugyouplz: :iconimdedplz: :iconsexyjapanplz: :iconyesjapanplz: 

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LadyCaitlin0429 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I tried to translate the Japanese by myself, and I did okay! I'll just go back to reading and listening to Gumi's song 'Ten Faced' now. :3
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol nice
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was just like------> :iconflailingplz:  
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