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Stuffed Baby Turtle



...you pull out a stuffed baby turtle?


That's what you thought before it started squirming in your hands, you shriek and almost drop the small turtle. It climbs out of your hands and down your body until it gets to the floor, then it goes to search for its "Daddy" also known as Antonio Fernandez Carriedo, your long time crush.


You follow the small turtle until you bumped into someone, effectively falling onto your ass, and that someone was Antonio.


"Oh! [Name], are you alright chica?" Antonio asks holding out his hand for you, smiling his signature smile.


"Y-Yeah, I wasn't paying attention to where I was going so its my fault...sorry..." you say your face turning a light pink as you take his hand.


"Dude, Antonio, [Name] picked your item so its your turn, man."Alfred says motioning the two of you to follow him.


Antonio hold onto your hand as he follows Alfred to the small, dark, cramped and cluttered closet. Once inside the closet Alfred closed the door effectively locking it behind you.


You were now in a dark closet alone with the one person you loved.


"So how have you been [Name]?" Antonio asks pulling you down to sit on the floor with him."You haven't been coming over for a while...why?" a sad tone in his voice as he asked that.


'I can't tell him its because I lost my job and I'm soon going to lose my home if I don't find a new job soon...' you think and put a fake smile on your face.


You're the kind of person who puts others before yourself and if you were down or upset you would put a smile on your face so others wouldn't worry...even though your starting to go through depression.


"I've been great Antonio, and I've just been a little busy with work is all." you say with the fake smile on your face, you tried to make your voice sound as cheerful as possible which failed.


"[Name]...you know you can tell me anything right?" he asks his voice no longer cheerful as before.


"Yes I know, Tony." you say no longer smiling.


"If your having any trouble I'll try to help you as much as I can...because...I care and worry about you [Name]!" he says holding onto your hands.


You stare at him in shock...he cares about you? But is it just as friends? Or something more?


Before you get the chance to answer, he pulls you into his chest then lifts your head up and kisses you passionately on the lips. It takes you a few minutes to process what was happening, but you were soon kissing him back.


Antonio breaks the kiss and backs away a little."[N-Name]...Te amo(1)..."


"I love you too Tony." you say hugging him.


"Let me help and protect you now okay?" he asks petting the top of your head.


"Okay." you reply nodding your head a little.


"Okay good, now do you want to be my novia(2)?" he asks looking down at you with a small smile on his face.


"Si!" you say hugging him and kissing him again...this time you noticed something...he tasted like tomato's!


Then the door unlocks and slams open to show the stubborn Italian that was your best friend, Lovino Vargas.


"Oi, tomato bastardo, times up!" Lovino says walking away from the door.


Antonio gets up then helps you up and out of the closet. The rest of the night you spent hanging out with your new boyfriend, Antonio Fernandez Carriedo~.



~THE END~



-Bonus Ending-



After the party you slowly came out of depression and found a good steady job, all thanks to your boyfriend Antonio.


"Thanks Antonio." you say with a smile as you stand on his porch and look up at him.


"No problem mi amor~!(3)" Antonio reply's hugging you and kissing you, which you gladly returned.


A/N: (1) means I love you; (2) means girlfriend;(3) means my love
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Well here's Spain's ending.
Enjoy!
Also I don't own Hetalia, the picture, or you!
Beta Reader: :iconwolf-girl15:
Sory: :iconphasewalker96:
Sorry if there is miss spelled words but comment with the correct spelling please!
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:iconadrianarosabell:
adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
wonderful story  I really liked as well as 66 other people you know I speak Spanish too maybe I like Antonio so much because I am from Spain too?
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Cutiepielover1289 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
ITS SO FLUFFY I WANNA DIE!!!
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe plz don't do that...I'd rather not be the cause of someone dieing...
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Kagami7788 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
FLUFFINESS I'M DROWNING IN THE STUFF!!!!
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:iconfurchild1204:
furchild1204 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsquealplz:
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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:iconxxartimisxx:
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student General Artist
AAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe ^^
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SgtJellyBeans Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   General Artist
:iconsqueeeeplz: Spain~
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yep glad you liked it ^^
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Akari-Sakumi Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Antonio: Hmm, now what item should I use...? *feels something tug his shirt* Ah! Perfecto! *grabs turtle*
XDDD
:iconspainturtleplz:
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creativehelper14 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
BEST ICON EVA!! this made my day >w<
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol glad you liked it ^^
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:iconkatykat529:
katykat529 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Could you by any chance do Roma's next?
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea I think I can do that
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:iconkatykat529:
katykat529 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
Yay!!! Can't wait!
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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SpeedChic Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) ;-D
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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Flyeaf Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Romano. What. You aren't jealous or something.
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Romano: Hell No why would I be jealous of you being with that....tomato...bastardo...*looks away frowning and crosses his arms*
Me: Ah! Romano don't worry you still have your whole fan base to have trying to rip your clothes off your body~!
Romano: O.o
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Flyeaf Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
B-but...B-but...I...want you to be jealous! *sits in a corner and starts crying*
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry I'll try to get his ending up ASAP okay? *puts a hand on your shoulder*
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:iconflyeaf:
Flyeaf Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yaaaay! *hugs you and Romano*
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah no prob ^^
Romano: O///O Let me go damnit!!!
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:iconflyeaf:
Flyeaf Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*hugs tighter* Noope! Oh wait... *sees his hair curl and smirks*
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: A-At least let me go~ >~<
Romano: W-What are you looking at idiota?
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starwarriormizuki Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i just noticed this but....what happened to the baby turtle? did he disappear or something?
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...now that I think about it idk... maybe its a ninja turtle... O.o
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:iconstarwarriormizuki:
starwarriormizuki Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
XD maybe.
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ yeah
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:iconstarwarriormizuki:
starwarriormizuki Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconspainplz: :iconsaysplz: um where did the turtle go
Reader: now where did it go?

its a mystery that may be solved if someone wanted to.
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That would be a cool if someone did do that and I have no problem if someone wanted to do that I've been hitting writer blocks lately so yeah...
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starwarriormizuki Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
same here i have a story that i wrote in 8th grade and i still haven't finished it. (i am now a freshmen in high school) i am stuck on the third chapter.
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah I have a story that I started writing last winter and I'm up to chapter 8 but I'm still typing the 1st chapter in my journal
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FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Filmographer
Te queiro is I want you, Te amo is I love you.
But other than that, Good Job! It's cute! <3 :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok. Thank you. Someone else had commented that 'te queiro' was 'I love you' and I checked it. Somehow it said it was correct, but a friend of mine who is my beta reader also believed that 'te amo' was the correct translation instead of 'te queiro'. And Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
:icongrin--plz:
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FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Filmographer
Yah, full blood Mexican here. But yah I saw that comment that the person made about Te quiero. xD It could be used toward a person but it would be kinda like :iconsemespainplz::iconsaysplz:Te quiero tu virginidad Phasewalker96....
Yep. That would be the best context. V_V
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright! Thank you for the help! I greatly appreciate it! Also I will fix it now... :iconsweatdropplz:...god I suck at translations...
So I was wondering if you would please be my translator? please? :icononibeg::iconarigatouplz:
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FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Filmographer
Pffffft, you are so cute! Sure ^-^
:iconadorablehugplz:
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:iconphasewalker96:
Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icononicheer: Thank you so much! :icondragonglomp:
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HoshiTomoya21 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Te Quiero is spanish for i love you ._l
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ZoeTheICONiac Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually te amo is Spanish for I love you as well. Te amo is just the more common used form
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
okay thanks I'll change it now
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HoshiTomoya21 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
np
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Gwen1661 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually, compañera mean partner. To say girlfriend in Spanish is 'novia'.

I'm from Argentina and I speak Spanish so if you need help with Spanish words you can ask me ^^
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Phasewalker96 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
okay thanks I'll fix it now
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